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Title: I Can Hear You
Description: A poem I wrote for two girls in my class


EscapeFromHere - April 8, 2009 11:58 AM (GMT)
And again I try
Not to cry
I choke back tears
And face my fears

I can hear you whispering

I pretend not to hear
'Cause my arms are clear
But still you stare
'Cause you don't care

I can hear you laughing

I look down at my book
And try not to look
As you mock me
But it's not really me

I can see your "scars"

You dont know a thing
About the songs that I sing
The reasons I cry
The words that I lie

I can see you looking

You don't know what it means
To tear the seams
Of someone else's life
It's just not right

I can feel pain

As I cover my eyes
And listen to your lies
Even though you're near
I try not to hear

But I can hear you whispering!

XxgothicteddybearXx - April 8, 2009 11:01 PM (GMT)
I really like this, it hits close to my heart.
and you are also a very good writer,
you speak about the truth and I really like that.

crazyblondepinky - April 9, 2009 12:53 AM (GMT)
That's exactly what I was going to say about it, only it wouldn't have sounded that well put. It's really honest and it comes from your heart.

EscapeFromHere - April 10, 2009 03:57 PM (GMT)
Thanks

AprilRyan - April 12, 2009 02:01 AM (GMT)
I agree this poem is amazing and comes from the heart, and behind the words you just know how much emotion is just waiting to be poured out. I really like this, and you are a great writer,
I can see that truly did come from the heart, and I thought it to be well written and clear,
Once more, it was great :)

bobbiesam - April 30, 2009 12:23 AM (GMT)
great poem
I totally agree
I love the poem
it speaks emotions that I cant really put out in words
so well written.





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