Hey guys,

Sorry for the mega long wait. :(

This comic and the next one have been done for weeks, I was waiting for Legolas to complete his, but then we made a swap and I changed the issue numbers so I could finally post these two. Hopefully, Legolas will finish the one he's working on. :)

On to the comic; In this comic we will expireince the debut of the Megablokim empire, and Clordiforcian Syndicate, the tapestry of Prydain, and many other treasures. (as Maedhros will find out on page 5 ;) )



Page 2

Page 3 (Crispen's second appearance)

Page 4

Page 5 (flight of the Vampire)

Page 6 (Murder!)

The folder

Enjoy it! I'll post part 2 later to let the tension sink in a bit. :P

Please tell me what you think of it. :)

"Intriguing, most intriguing indeed."

I was suprised to see blood for the first time, but nontheless, the story is interesting, most excellent!
Who are the clordiforcians? To me, they are kind of like Team Rocket, yet not.

Where has Legolas gone, btw? :blink:

Iam really interested to see how this turns out, since its yet another one not based on my ideas. :)

Ah... some of my true powers are revealed B)

Really nice comic, Graynar, again I´m amazed at your skills. It´s till getting better ;)

I´m also a bit confused about the clordifocians though..

Can´t wait for the rest!

Thanks for the comments. :)

The Clordiforcians are an imaginary kingdom from the internet. More of them will be revealed later. ;)

Never fear! For issue 6 is writen by you and it is - Odd Yssey and it's kind of cool I must say. ;)

He was on the other day but says he's really busy.

Sweet !!! I love it !!

A demonstration of Crispens true power, excellent !! I can't wait to read the next part, keep up the great work.

I am somewhat here...

Great comic Graynar! If you have read my latest Pm, disregard that please. I have started working on it again. Is it ok if I don't color it though?

I can't wait to read the second part,

BJ/Legolas.

Wow! This story is really bringing in a lot of action and factions from around the... universe? :P I love it! The Megablokim empire (and their contantly breaking weapons) is my favorite faction so far (besides, of course, CW!).

You can really put some personality into these characters, no doubt about it... and I like the new powers on display... Necromancer and Vampire (bat-huma-... ehh... LEGO fig). :D

I wonder who that last character is in the last window though? :horn:


Altogether, very well written and illustrated. Also, the text is clear, and you're now officially a master at these colors... they all look vivid and are perfectly placed. A real bit of talent on display... and even a bobble-head or two... I swear I saw one... or is it just me. LOL...

Thanks for the comments! :D

Sure, but colour does make it more comic like though. :unsure:

You will find out soon. :rolleyes:

Funny thing is, I have two comics ready to go right now. Do you want me to post them now? Or wait a little while?

To let you know, the two finished comics are;

Prized Possession part 2

and

Odd Yssey (story by the one, the only, Hordesman!)

Please let me know, thanks.

I would want everything posted now, I think most people agree. :P

If we had a start page I think it would be excellent to have a section for the comics there... *dreaming* :rolleyes:

*Agrees*

I agree as well... more more more!! Don't leave me hangin' like this after part one... ;)

I've been pondering what to do about the Comics... they don't really go under "Comics" in the Scriptorium, because they aren't true LEGO figs and what not... but they aren't "other" either... I think it's time to make an official CW Comic section for the scriptorium.

Why not add the comics to "The Author's Gallery" It seems to be the best section for them, other then a new section specifically for them.

Second !