Title: Mely Sibiscus
Mely - December 9, 2007 11:19 PM (GMT)
Trainer Name: Mely Ann Sibiscus
Nicknames, Name your character likes to be called: Mely
Age: 11
Sex: female
Personality: Mely loves to ice skate. her favorite thing to eat is anything with sugar in it. Her saying is " A little goes a long way." She likes to write poetry. And loves pokemon.
She hates people self obsesed. The same thing with brussel spouts. But the thing she hates most is is people who want to harm pokemon. She also hates wearing the same thing over and over again. The only food she dislikes that has sugar in it is apple pie.
Appearance: Mely has long black hair. She wears a megenta sweater. She also wears a dark blue skirt. She wears a blue purse that holds a clairenet. She wears a loket that holds a picture of her fater that died when she was little.
Mely wears black glasses. And has a tan face. Her glasses usually lay on her nose. Her cheeks are slightly pink. And her nose is medium sized. Mely is short and skinny. She wears white tennis shoes.
Accessories: locket, purse, clairenet, glasses
-[Pokemon]-
For a starter I want
-Starter-
Species:
Gender: female
Nickname: Blondie
Level, EXP:
Attacks:
Held Items:
Nicknames, Name your character likes to be called: Mely
Age: 11
Sex: female
Personality: Mely loves to ice skate. her favorite thing to eat is anything with sugar in it. Her saying is " A little goes a long way." She likes to write poetry. And loves pokemon.
She hates people self obsesed. The same thing with brussel spouts. But the thing she hates most is is people who want to harm pokemon. She also hates wearing the same thing over and over again. The only food she dislikes that has sugar in it is apple pie.
Appearance: Mely has long black hair. She wears a megenta sweater. She also wears a dark blue skirt. She wears a blue purse that holds a clairenet. She wears a loket that holds a picture of her fater that died when she was little.
Mely wears black glasses. And has a tan face. Her glasses usually lay on her nose. Her cheeks are slightly pink. And her nose is medium sized. Mely is short and skinny. She wears white tennis shoes.
Accessories: locket, purse, clairenet, glasses
-[Pokemon]-
For a starter I want
-Starter-
Species:
Gender: female
Nickname: Blondie
Level, EXP:
Attacks:
Held Items:
Mane~ - December 10, 2007 02:05 AM (GMT)
If you could please add more detail to personality and appearance, and make sure that they are two paragraphs each. You should be fine if you do those things.
Master Icy - December 11, 2007 12:03 AM (GMT)
Pokemon:
Name: Blondie
Gender: female
Species: Eevee
Level: 5
Personality: Modest
Wild Battle EXP#: 0
Friendship Points: 1
Attacks: Tackle, Sand Attack
Money: $500
Items: 5x PokeBalls
Hometown: ????
Congradulations, welcome to Pokemon Valley, stay active!
Name: Blondie
Gender: female
Species: Eevee
Level: 5
Personality: Modest
Wild Battle EXP#: 0
Friendship Points: 1
Attacks: Tackle, Sand Attack
Money: $500
Items: 5x PokeBalls
Hometown: ????
Congradulations, welcome to Pokemon Valley, stay active!
tryanitartamer - December 11, 2007 02:18 AM (GMT)
Um, sorry but this isn't going to work.
Icy I'm dissppointed as a mod you should know that this Application is in no shape to be accepted yet...... I'm sorry Mely, but I need you too label your appearence and add just a little more detail in it. Also you need to add a little bit more to your first paragraph in appearence and then i need another one from you. I know this sounds like alot, but I'm sure you can do it.
As for you Icy, Mane posted before you asking for her to change some stuff and you go ahead and accept her...... sorry but that wont work.
Mely just make those few changes and I'm sure you'll get Reaccepted
Thankz
{Ty}
Icy I'm dissppointed as a mod you should know that this Application is in no shape to be accepted yet...... I'm sorry Mely, but I need you too label your appearence and add just a little more detail in it. Also you need to add a little bit more to your first paragraph in appearence and then i need another one from you. I know this sounds like alot, but I'm sure you can do it.
As for you Icy, Mane posted before you asking for her to change some stuff and you go ahead and accept her...... sorry but that wont work.
Mely just make those few changes and I'm sure you'll get Reaccepted
Thankz
{Ty}
Sky - December 25, 2007 03:29 AM (GMT)
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