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Title: Walking home


Keiko - September 15, 2005 08:09 PM (GMT)
Keiko was walking through the park late at night. She had just left one of her friends house after finishing a project for school.

Akina - September 16, 2005 12:58 AM (GMT)
While she was walking home, she became paranoid buy all the sounds that she was hearing, The owls calling, rustling of the leaves, silence in the air.

A couple of guys stopped her in her path. "Hey sweat thang, shake that thing over here." they pulled out soem kinves

Diego - September 16, 2005 08:33 PM (GMT)
Diego was in the park staring at the moon when her he saw the glisen off of knives form the moon light and ran over to where heiko was

Keiko - September 17, 2005 06:35 PM (GMT)
Keiko stared at the boys. She backed up a bit

Diego - September 17, 2005 06:41 PM (GMT)
"Come here pretty lady." on eof them grabs her arm

Keiko - September 17, 2005 06:43 PM (GMT)
"Get off of me." Keiko yelled. SHe pulled her arm back.

Diego - September 17, 2005 06:57 PM (GMT)
"Fisty." one said.
he went to slap her and Diego stopped his hand.
"Don't touch her, he said.


Keiko - September 17, 2005 07:04 PM (GMT)
Keiko looked up at Diego. Fear was on her face.

Diego - September 17, 2005 07:14 PM (GMT)
The mugger pull his arm back "Boy get out of here if you know what is good for you."he said

"No I don't want anyone getting hert so stop it." Diego yelled.

2 muggers took Diego's arm and held him up to a tree.

"Boy we are working here, the leader of them said.

The last mugger held keiko so she couldn't escape.

Keiko - September 17, 2005 07:15 PM (GMT)
Keiko struggled to get free. "What do you want?"

Diego - September 17, 2005 07:24 PM (GMT)
"Your body, he says as he recaptures her. "And if you don't corroperate you will end up like your super-hero over there."

the leader starts to beat him up. Blood comes out of Diego's mouth.

Keiko - September 17, 2005 07:25 PM (GMT)
"Get off of me." Keiko yelled. She tried to pull away from him.

Diego - September 18, 2005 01:39 AM (GMT)
Get....off..of...herrr,"Diego utters.

The leader,"Haha, talk off all her clothes" turnes to Diego."Damn, you should be done by now."

The mugger rips off Keikos left arm of her shirt.

"Stop.!" Diego breaks loose and goes after the mugger holding Keiko but the leader takes his elbow and drives it straight into Diego's neck causing him to get knocked out but Diego is still bleeding.

Now all the muggers are after keiko.

Keiko - September 18, 2005 06:53 PM (GMT)
"Leave me alone." Keiko says as she backs up.

Diego - September 19, 2005 12:00 AM (GMT)
They all crowd around her and pull out their knives

"Little girl, u are not gettign away from us." a mugger says.

one of the mugger cut Keiko and alittle blood spills out.

Keiko - September 19, 2005 07:24 PM (GMT)
Keiko cried out in pain. She clunched her arm trying to stop the bleeding.

Diego - September 20, 2005 11:31 PM (GMT)
"That is waht I want to here, scream somemore, cuz know one is going to save you." said the leader.
A mugger started to jab at Keiko andsccidentaly cut his own man.

"Watch waht you are doing." the mugger started to bleed.
"Sorry, I was aiming for her." he said, the leader hit him over the head.
The mugger who got cut bled onto the ground.

Diego stood up, his head was pointed to the ground. His body was drenched in his own blood. "I want blood." he said

The muggers looked at him in amazement. "Look at all that blood. He should be died." a mugger said.

Keiko - September 21, 2005 01:09 PM (GMT)
AS they were looking at Diego Keiko took the chase and threw rocks at all of them.

Diego - September 21, 2005 09:18 PM (GMT)
Hey get back here." a mugger said. Keiko throw a rock and hit him between the eyes. He dropped on the ground crying.

The rest of the muggers wereto focused on Diego. "i GUESS YOU WANT SOME..MORE!!" yelled the cut mugger. He pulled out his knife and ran toward Diego. Diego caught him adn bit into his neck. The Mugger began to scream in pain. In 2 secounds the mugger was died and Diego stopped bleeding but he passed out again. The rest of the muggers went over and started to check on there man and started to kick Diego. The leader Snuck up behind Keiko and grabbed her and tied her to a tree.
"Now you are going to die, biotch."
the leader said.

Yusuke - September 21, 2005 11:58 PM (GMT)
Yusuke was walking through the park. He was on his way home when He saw a group of muggers. He seen someone grab one of the muggers and bite his neck. Both men fell to the ground, not moving. The rest of the muggers kicked the young man. He seen One of the bigger guys who he assumed the leader grab a girl and tie her to a tree. He felt anger swell up inside of him when he realized it was Keiko. Yusuke calmly walked over to the leader and Keiko. "Can I help you sir?" he asked, venom dripping from his voice.

Akina - September 22, 2005 12:04 AM (GMT)
"Not another Hero." said the leader.
2 other muggers surrounded Yusuke,.

Yusuke - September 22, 2005 12:13 AM (GMT)
Yusuke took a brief glance at the 2 muggers. "That wouldn't be wise, Dumb fucks. I'll beat you so bad, you'd wished I'd killed you."

Akina - September 22, 2005 12:34 AM (GMT)
"Look waht we did to the first hero that ried to dave this girl." A mugger points to Diego. "That is going to be you." he tried to save Yusuke.

Yusuke - September 22, 2005 12:48 AM (GMT)
Yusuke looked at Diego. 'Note to self, teach the bastard how to fight.' he then looked back at the mugger. "Wrong, your going to look like that."

Diego - September 22, 2005 12:53 AM (GMT)
The 3 muggers came up to him and started swinging and one mugger hit Yusuke.

Yusuke - September 22, 2005 01:10 AM (GMT)
Yusuke was hit in the face by one mugger. He smirked as he punched the guy in the ribs, breaking several ribs. He then looked at the others. "want some?"

Diego - September 22, 2005 01:14 AM (GMT)
This guy is for real." the mugger said to his leader. They both agrees and ran off.

Yusuke - September 22, 2005 01:22 AM (GMT)
Yusuke ran over to keiko and untied her. "You okay?" he asked. worry in his voice.

Keiko - September 22, 2005 03:29 PM (GMT)
As soon as Yusuke untied her she threw her arms around him. "I was so scared."

Yusuke - September 22, 2005 03:30 PM (GMT)
Yusuke hesitated for abit before he put his arms around her. "Did they do anything to you?"

Keiko - September 22, 2005 08:18 PM (GMT)
Keiko shook her head.

Yusuke - September 22, 2005 08:23 PM (GMT)
"What happened?" he asked.

Keiko - September 22, 2005 09:48 PM (GMT)
"I was walking home when these men attacked me." Keiko said. She started to shake.

Yusuke - September 22, 2005 09:49 PM (GMT)
Yusuke started to rub her back, hoping to make her feel better. "And what about Diego or what's his face?"

Keiko - September 24, 2005 05:34 PM (GMT)
"I don't know."

Yusuke - September 24, 2005 05:40 PM (GMT)
Yusuke let keiko go and walked over to Diego. he felt for a pulse. After finding one, he shook him. "Hey. Hey wake up."

Diego - September 25, 2005 12:53 AM (GMT)
Diego Opened his eyes. "Where..Where am..I..Boss." he said.

Yusuke - September 25, 2005 01:46 AM (GMT)
Yusuke's eye twiched. "Boss? I think you've got me confused." he said.

Diego - September 25, 2005 10:03 PM (GMT)
Diego Jumpe duo and grabbed the switch knife that one of the muggers were carring." Come here girly." Diego said. Then Diego passed out again.

Keiko - September 26, 2005 07:47 PM (GMT)
"Um...ok.."




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