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Title: Third poem
Description: Late but here


gymman444 - August 16, 2008 08:23 AM (GMT)
Remember I’m sorry

I’m sorry

I know the things I’ve done
And I regret most of them
The problem is no one can forget them
No one can forget the things I have done

I’m sorry

I don’t ask for you to forget
I don’t ask for your forgiveness
I ask for a second chance
I ask for a new beginning

I’m sorry

Second chances few people get
If you think I don’t deserve one
I will forget and leave in peace

I’m sorry

But if you feel I’ve deserved a new chance
I ask for you to remember

I’m sorry

Please remember the happiness
Remember the laughter
Remember the smiles
The good

Remember

Remember all
The tears
The sadness
And the bad

Remember

I’m sorry



I would like all feed back I might send this to someone so be blunt.

Drake McCloud - August 16, 2008 02:09 PM (GMT)
A very serious poem that will make the person you are sending it to think. I don't know what it is that was done, but I hope that second chance is given in a good manner. If not learn from the harmful mistake and move on in the best way(s) possible. I like this poem though, we don't see too many of these types of poems here.

gymman444 - August 17, 2008 12:21 PM (GMT)
Thanks, I wrote it at around 1 o'clock when I could not sleep.

Drake McCloud - August 17, 2008 02:02 PM (GMT)
It was very well thought out when you wrote it so I hope you were able to rest afterwards and I hope the situation turns out for the best.

Mad But Happy - August 17, 2008 09:56 PM (GMT)
What Drake said, this is very nice. :) I think we've all had feelings like this at some point. Nice work!

gymman444 - August 18, 2008 06:16 AM (GMT)
Thanks alot.




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