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Title: My Frist Poem..On this forum
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Angel of Betrayal - January 19, 2006 08:50 PM (GMT)
Did I Hurt You?

Are you Bleeding yet?
Are you Feeling the pain i have?
You stole my freedom
I'll Steal your heart,
I Won't feel regret
Why should I? you don't!
I shall destroy you
Then spit on your Grave!
Did I Hurt You?

Before, when I was weak
And Couldn't overcome,
You kicked me when I was down
So I could never get up,
I bleed for hours, my tears stung
You had no idea of pain till now,
Outside life went on not knowing
Not knowing my pain and fear,
Did I hurt you?

No else will ever know the pain
Feel the tears, so don't bother,
Don't bother telling everyone,
Don't try to explain, there's no point,
No matter how much you tell someone,
Everyone else will never know the extent,
That is why this is personal I need this
I need you dead by my hands, for no one else knows,
Did I hurt you? I hope I did for no else can!!

Please Comment if you want

blastmaster - January 19, 2006 09:02 PM (GMT)
i like it

Angelus - January 20, 2006 12:33 AM (GMT)
Very good.

beverly - January 20, 2006 02:44 AM (GMT)
well written, a lot of emotion, easy to read, LOVE IT!

amy's bodyguard - January 20, 2006 03:39 AM (GMT)
^I agree,it's beautiful

cowluva - January 20, 2006 04:49 AM (GMT)
nice job hun!

Angel of Betrayal - January 20, 2006 08:07 PM (GMT)
Why thank you all ^^




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