I'm thinking if you take out the time-references you can go on and we can delete these stupid staff-inserted posties.

Then when the ball-thread is done, you can decide if you still want this to be taking place after the ball or if you would have written it differently then and would rather it was before Easter.

Datt sound okay?

Sounds fine to me :D

I checked over my post and I think its okay. Does anything need to be fixed (in your opinion?)

Nupe, nuttin', and nuttin' in Marie's either. *removes hold* Go right ahead.